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Darkness entrenches her The ghost like fog wraps around Her body like a quilt But this fog is nothing like a quilt. Sure, its solid like a quilt, Heavy like a quilt. But that's just a simile Used for imagery. The darkness And the fog, The coldness The emptiness. Where is the warmth of a quilt? How did she get into a place Like this, with no sun, no protection, And low visibility? Only deep inside of her brain lies the answer. But can she find it?
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May 27, 2013
May 27, 2013 at 3:13 PM UTC
The Fog
Darkness entrenches her The ghost like fog wraps around Her body like a quilt But this fog is nothing like a quilt. Sure, its solid like a quilt, Heavy like a quilt. But that's just a simile Used for imagery. The darkness And the fog, The coldness The emptiness. Where is the warmth of a quilt? How did she get into a place Like this, with no sun, no protection, And low visibility? Only deep inside of her brain lies the answer. But can she find it?
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May 27, 2013
May 27, 2013 at 3:13 PM UTC
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