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When you came unto my life it brightened up my day some doldrums faded swiftly I threw the rest away. The first date is the standard test will I like her, will she like me? I was pleased and jubilant (the way it worked you see). You were charming and delightful as we chatted about life about ordinary things work and play, stress and strife. Old loves, better times and music books we liked and ones we hated food we loved, the past and present and things better left unstated. When you came into my life, you were like sunshine after rain I felt whole again, revived like someone finally free of pain.
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Mar 30, 2020
Mar 30, 2020 at 11:09 PM UTC
When You Came Into My Life.
When you came unto my life it brightened up my day some doldrums faded swiftly I threw the rest away. The first date is the standard test will I like her, will she like me? I was pleased and jubilant (the way it worked you see). You were charming and delightful as we chatted about life about ordinary things work and play, stress and strife. Old loves, better times and music books we liked and ones we hated food we loved, the past and present and things better left unstated. When you came into my life, you were like sunshine after rain I felt whole again, revived like someone finally free of pain.
david-lessard
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Mar 30, 2020
Mar 30, 2020 at 11:09 PM UTC
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