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1. white chapel on a hill sheep dot rugged, earthy slopes ruminate on warm, sun-kissed dale endless lines and lines of verdant tones late afternoon sun slanting behold, jaune compassion alfalfa ocherous leans willowy in wind distance of silence yearns on afternoon shadows lie within majestic vales powder-blue ranges in 3D tiers shadowy rifts, like a painting out of heaven lone tree not alone, reaches up blinding turns and rust-coloured bends, twisty trails two on horseback, apples for sale reservoir as a hold all for all brown mud is where redemption lies. 2. sun dips away, out of reach beyond the eye's catch step out car feel the ping of silence, deeply-alive zing crowd in and then, into the slot of torched horizon the orange world slips . . . S T, 19 May 2013
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May 19, 2013
May 19, 2013 at 6:29 AM UTC
redeem
1. white chapel on a hill sheep dot rugged, earthy slopes ruminate on warm, sun-kissed dale endless lines and lines of verdant tones late afternoon sun slanting behold, jaune compassion alfalfa ocherous leans willowy in wind distance of silence yearns on afternoon shadows lie within majestic vales powder-blue ranges in 3D tiers shadowy rifts, like a painting out of heaven lone tree not alone, reaches up blinding turns and rust-coloured bends, twisty trails two on horseback, apples for sale reservoir as a hold all for all brown mud is where redemption lies. 2. sun dips away, out of reach beyond the eye's catch step out car feel the ping of silence, deeply-alive zing crowd in and then, into the slot of torched horizon the orange world slips . . . S T, 19 May 2013
feel that deep humming of the car, as we finally decide to roll along that country ride.....yesterday saturn-day :) redemption humbly sought in the passing of hills and vales lovely...all along the eastern escarpment of the beautiful Mercy-Valley...not far from Lake Great Bear on southern Jupiter :) yet evening cold can sink so hard and fast in the countryside (best be prepared :) away from all the noise and bustle - rolling, green dales and oh blue, blue, blue.... sub-entry: 'sudden cold' 1. how dreaded that sudden coldness press downward crouch tight upon shoulder drape your chilly cape over me clench your claws into soft flesh hover abrupt around nostrils whisper icy whittler-words sinking into pores, settle on pinched nose-end, fingertips and toes from across the chasm, silent eyes admonish burning freeze stick so hard hug disfavoured hart oh cold silence, how you **** me! 2. envelops round me try in vain to wrap my head around this warm heart take this thing and throw it in the dump (can't just can't) 3. blanket of love whopping oblivion away seek still to redeem.
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May 19, 2013
May 19, 2013 at 6:29 AM UTC
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