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Ah, Jacob I love you (look! I have personalized my poem! But alas, that means I have isolated the audience. By mentioning your name- such a wonderful name, it reminds me of church bells Doritos and a good shower after a long run- by mentioning your name, I have ensured that those not in love with a Jacob- and I pity them, for if they do not have one, they should seriously consider finding one- Anyway By mentioning you name, my love I have ensured that those not in love with a Jacob will never understand the soaring joy sorrow trust security never understand what it is they have just read).
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May 18, 2013
May 18, 2013 at 11:09 AM UTC
Love Song in Parenthetical
Ah, Jacob I love you (look! I have personalized my poem! But alas, that means I have isolated the audience. By mentioning your name- such a wonderful name, it reminds me of church bells Doritos and a good shower after a long run- by mentioning your name, I have ensured that those not in love with a Jacob- and I pity them, for if they do not have one, they should seriously consider finding one- Anyway By mentioning you name, my love I have ensured that those not in love with a Jacob will never understand the soaring joy sorrow trust security never understand what it is they have just read).
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May 18, 2013
May 18, 2013 at 11:09 AM UTC
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