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*The light is racing from our room, seeping through the cracks under the door. The darkness grows, casting us into shadow.* but all things including light die in the end utterances in the small places of my dark mind lend themselfs to such times i would not suffer to pass the hour without bringing forth all the angers and mettlesome ways that confound you *the smokes rakes against my mind, hiding me behind my eyes. The truth came calling along with the clock's toll, but who among us could answer such an ominous cry? When the hours between midnight and 4 am are so unforgiving.* i am filled with tears until i can bear no more your words kiss my mind and i cannot return this tenderness for it would turn to love i am waiting these hours in the desolate towers of cold for the rescue of dawn *but it gives little comfort were that i could reach out to you but i dare not i dare not* Edit et al:           Collaboration Poem written by alyssainwonderland (http://hellopoetry.com/-alyssainwonderland/) and I (Mark John Junor); alyssainwonderland contributions are in italics
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May 17, 2013
May 17, 2013 at 8:56 PM UTC
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*The light is racing from our room, seeping through the cracks under the door. The darkness grows, casting us into shadow.* but all things including light die in the end utterances in the small places of my dark mind lend themselfs to such times i would not suffer to pass the hour without bringing forth all the angers and mettlesome ways that confound you *the smokes rakes against my mind, hiding me behind my eyes. The truth came calling along with the clock's toll, but who among us could answer such an ominous cry? When the hours between midnight and 4 am are so unforgiving.* i am filled with tears until i can bear no more your words kiss my mind and i cannot return this tenderness for it would turn to love i am waiting these hours in the desolate towers of cold for the rescue of dawn *but it gives little comfort were that i could reach out to you but i dare not i dare not* Edit et al:           Collaboration Poem written by alyssainwonderland (http://hellopoetry.com/-alyssainwonderland/) and I (Mark John Junor); alyssainwonderland contributions are in italics
edit: formatting error reverted italic text.....see http://hellopoetry.com/-alyssainwonderland/ for corrected version
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May 17, 2013
May 17, 2013 at 8:56 PM UTC
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