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We were born in the jungle, Living in the shadows, Clinging to our families In the dark, under the trees. Life was good then, We had picked fruit from branches And swung on them for joy. And there was no greed Or jealousy. Over millions of years, We lived in harmony, Until the forest changed; The garden shriveled and Faded away as we watched. Our lives were rearranged. Some among us ventured out. Giving to our sin: curiosity. Down in the street Canyons of concrete and steel The powerful gather Hors d’oeuvres are served, Placating the hunger of the powerful, This is never stated; They will keep taking As long as we allow it. One day, some loner, a rebel May emerge from the shadows, Dark-clad, filled with inchoate rage*. He will find like-minded souls Who use the new inventions To topple the oligarchs, Empty their accounts And give them to the world. Chaos may follow, But out of it a new humanity Might arise.
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Feb 20, 2020
Feb 20, 2020 at 8:20 PM UTC
In the Shadows
We were born in the jungle, Living in the shadows, Clinging to our families In the dark, under the trees. Life was good then, We had picked fruit from branches And swung on them for joy. And there was no greed Or jealousy. Over millions of years, We lived in harmony, Until the forest changed; The garden shriveled and Faded away as we watched. Our lives were rearranged. Some among us ventured out. Giving to our sin: curiosity. Down in the street Canyons of concrete and steel The powerful gather Hors d’oeuvres are served, Placating the hunger of the powerful, This is never stated; They will keep taking As long as we allow it. One day, some loner, a rebel May emerge from the shadows, Dark-clad, filled with inchoate rage*. He will find like-minded souls Who use the new inventions To topple the oligarchs, Empty their accounts And give them to the world. Chaos may follow, But out of it a new humanity Might arise.
My hope for a revolution, a redistribution of wealth. *NOTE: I realized after reading this a few times, that the "dark-clad" loner, "filled with inchoate rage", might be seen as a terrorist or religious extremist! NOT SO! I based him on the character Elliot Alderson, the brilliant and disaffected computer acker in "Mr. Robot", who successfully destroys a corrupt corporation, whose toxins killed his father and his best friend's mother. So, there's an element of revenge mixed in with ideological activism. My view is that IT is the only way to take down corrupt institutions. In the U.S., voting has been hijacked by the very rich and by other countries. Elliot also wants a redistribution of wealth, but without causing harm to anyone.
sharon-talbot
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Massachusetts, USA
Feb 20, 2020
Feb 20, 2020 at 8:20 PM UTC
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