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He nipped her lip the first time. Back against the brick wall. Bottles warming, soon forgotten at their feet. There was something so urgent in the way they fell-- limbs tangling on or against any surface that could hold them. But those surfaces were edged in pasts long hidden and razor-sharp, wrapped in caution tape. And they remembered their fragility. So they tucked in their elbows and side-stepped each other. Trading bitten lips for shattering glances, they told themselves No. But sometimes, in quiet moments, the Yes still breaks through.
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May 13, 2013
May 13, 2013 at 2:49 PM UTC
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He nipped her lip the first time. Back against the brick wall. Bottles warming, soon forgotten at their feet. There was something so urgent in the way they fell-- limbs tangling on or against any surface that could hold them. But those surfaces were edged in pasts long hidden and razor-sharp, wrapped in caution tape. And they remembered their fragility. So they tucked in their elbows and side-stepped each other. Trading bitten lips for shattering glances, they told themselves No. But sometimes, in quiet moments, the Yes still breaks through.
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May 13, 2013
May 13, 2013 at 2:49 PM UTC
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