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On a bogus hill, a man stood in self defence and shot himself, clean through the heart of the white flag that hung breezily around his neck, like a neckerchief in situ A calm reverence, self awareness, had positioned itself, 'enough' shone in the deaf hours before daylight begs, dislodging sad meanings from ungrateful dictionaries. You bought words, they lead you,   rocked a changed lullaby....au revoir, checking the white flag of departure, arrival of metal, red bled wounds, flag swaying, stained under surrender
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May 13, 2013
May 13, 2013 at 8:00 AM UTC
White Flag of Surrender
On a bogus hill, a man stood in self defence and shot himself, clean through the heart of the white flag that hung breezily around his neck, like a neckerchief in situ A calm reverence, self awareness, had positioned itself, 'enough' shone in the deaf hours before daylight begs, dislodging sad meanings from ungrateful dictionaries. You bought words, they lead you,   rocked a changed lullaby....au revoir, checking the white flag of departure, arrival of metal, red bled wounds, flag swaying, stained under surrender
laura-susan-smith
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May 13, 2013
May 13, 2013 at 8:00 AM UTC
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