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the rattling of the train on the tracks that runs right by us, shakes the core of the six strings that once held me together. i feel complete, laying next to you. and maybe i, well maybe i’m wrong. but this feels right. the creation we we bring the world. the composition of notes and love and exchanging breaths, the beautiful rhythm that we share cannot be fabricated again. there. i feel safe. hearing you laugh, (on my behalf) wether i like it or not, feels good. like sinking  my teeth into your bare neck. like pushing into you, with pure lust… i feel safe. feeling you, here, even if i’m not knowing enough for my own comfort.. i feel safe.
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May 10, 2013
May 10, 2013 at 8:50 PM UTC
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the rattling of the train on the tracks that runs right by us, shakes the core of the six strings that once held me together. i feel complete, laying next to you. and maybe i, well maybe i’m wrong. but this feels right. the creation we we bring the world. the composition of notes and love and exchanging breaths, the beautiful rhythm that we share cannot be fabricated again. there. i feel safe. hearing you laugh, (on my behalf) wether i like it or not, feels good. like sinking  my teeth into your bare neck. like pushing into you, with pure lust… i feel safe. feeling you, here, even if i’m not knowing enough for my own comfort.. i feel safe.
casper-elliott-owens
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May 10, 2013
May 10, 2013 at 8:50 PM UTC
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