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when i'm sitting alone at night in the quietness of my large and aging house i hear so many noises i'm oblivious to during the daylight the clicks of the air conditioning switching on and off, the creaking of the floors and walls, the subtle squeaking the fan makes in the living room it's as if my house is sighing it's sighing at me disappointed in me he asks why i don't notice him during the day why i only notice him late at night when i'm lonely and there are no other noises to entertain my ears i tell him that i'll try to listen more closely in the morning, but then i fall asleep and i wake up and i do not remember what i promised my sweet house so he continues to sigh all day long hoping that at some point even if it's late at night when i'm lonely and there is no other noises to entertain my ears i will notice him again if only for a little while
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May 10, 2013
May 10, 2013 at 6:25 PM UTC
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when i'm sitting alone at night in the quietness of my large and aging house i hear so many noises i'm oblivious to during the daylight the clicks of the air conditioning switching on and off, the creaking of the floors and walls, the subtle squeaking the fan makes in the living room it's as if my house is sighing it's sighing at me disappointed in me he asks why i don't notice him during the day why i only notice him late at night when i'm lonely and there are no other noises to entertain my ears i tell him that i'll try to listen more closely in the morning, but then i fall asleep and i wake up and i do not remember what i promised my sweet house so he continues to sigh all day long hoping that at some point even if it's late at night when i'm lonely and there is no other noises to entertain my ears i will notice him again if only for a little while
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May 10, 2013
May 10, 2013 at 6:25 PM UTC
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