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as i lay down to go to sleep my body still aches and my mind's draining blisters so red that I want to weep legs like noodles from today's training the erg awaits in the scorching sun waiting for its next victim to row as we strap in to enjoy the fun coach says "on my call, attention, row!" i pull and pull to keep my pace but wanting to stop and take a rest the crew goes harder to finish the race so i continue to row my best and yet i continue to go through all this and more for it is winter park crew that I adore
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May 9, 2013
May 9, 2013 at 6:29 AM UTC
{sonnet I: winter park crew}
as i lay down to go to sleep my body still aches and my mind's draining blisters so red that I want to weep legs like noodles from today's training the erg awaits in the scorching sun waiting for its next victim to row as we strap in to enjoy the fun coach says "on my call, attention, row!" i pull and pull to keep my pace but wanting to stop and take a rest the crew goes harder to finish the race so i continue to row my best and yet i continue to go through all this and more for it is winter park crew that I adore
sonnet i wrote in 9th grade for english
lauren-fehr
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May 9, 2013
May 9, 2013 at 6:29 AM UTC
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