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with every promise comes uncertainty, and that's something i've never been comfortable with so i'd like to say, "i promise," and i'd like to say, "forever," but you said, "fornever," and chased it down with a shot of absolut plus "and for always,"and then i managed to convinced myself, "i can handle tonight," and you said, "i love you," so i said, "please, please... take me down," and you said, "how far?" so i... showed you.
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Jun 5, 2010
Jun 5, 2010 at 9:10 PM UTC
we watched our kiss in a reflection.
with every promise comes uncertainty, and that's something i've never been comfortable with so i'd like to say, "i promise," and i'd like to say, "forever," but you said, "fornever," and chased it down with a shot of absolut plus "and for always,"and then i managed to convinced myself, "i can handle tonight," and you said, "i love you," so i said, "please, please... take me down," and you said, "how far?" so i... showed you.
and everything was backwards and nothing made sense but we went for it anyway. saturday and sunday, june 5th and 6th. 2010.
sarah-wilson
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Jun 5, 2010
Jun 5, 2010 at 9:10 PM UTC
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