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there is havoc at the tips of his skinny fingers. there is passion and fury in his rhythm. to the eyes, he is nothing but a quiet silhouette. but, his sound burns through your ears, down your spine, falling toward the floor granting religion to your feet. the guitars are discordant, the vocals are merciless and incomprehensible. the smoke is perfect. ******** clad women, drunken men, just dancing, crashing, clashing. i stand idle, a regular sore thumb, in the collective chaos. but the skeleton in the back, conducts the shouting symphony with a barrage of symmetry. scream. howl. holler. focus and control are his, not mine, hers or, any of the other hims. a psychedelic metronome, a machine of a heavy metal drummer. sweat. hips. hands. i watch him closely, silence inspiring the noisy. his eyes closed, his mind counting, while my mind melts, and all anyone thinks or felt was the beating of their hearts, matching the beat of his drums.
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Jun 4, 2010
Jun 4, 2010 at 10:01 PM UTC
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there is havoc at the tips of his skinny fingers. there is passion and fury in his rhythm. to the eyes, he is nothing but a quiet silhouette. but, his sound burns through your ears, down your spine, falling toward the floor granting religion to your feet. the guitars are discordant, the vocals are merciless and incomprehensible. the smoke is perfect. ******** clad women, drunken men, just dancing, crashing, clashing. i stand idle, a regular sore thumb, in the collective chaos. but the skeleton in the back, conducts the shouting symphony with a barrage of symmetry. scream. howl. holler. focus and control are his, not mine, hers or, any of the other hims. a psychedelic metronome, a machine of a heavy metal drummer. sweat. hips. hands. i watch him closely, silence inspiring the noisy. his eyes closed, his mind counting, while my mind melts, and all anyone thinks or felt was the beating of their hearts, matching the beat of his drums.
Copyright 2009 by Joshua J. Hutton
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Jun 4, 2010
Jun 4, 2010 at 10:01 PM UTC
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