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Janice sans red beret walked with you to Bedlam Park where you swam in the open air swimming pool (she swam you tried but failed) there in her green swimsuit her arms pulling her through water her hands pushing away the water’s skin while you stood waist deep gazing at her skills her wet hair her bright eyes you gingerly standing feet on the bottom feeling the water’s pull and push come on she said try to swim be brave and you dived forward into the water and splashed and sunk like some broken boat water in your eyes and ears you rose helped by Janice to the surface choking and spluttering wiping water from your stinging eyes she had her hand in yours holding you steady keeping you balanced she apologised for not helping should have helped she said not just stood and stared and you gazed at her through wet eyes forming an image making sense of the shape of her her eyes on you her damp hair limp against her skin o mermaid of the deep you said where is your tail? and she laughed and took you by the hand into the shallower water her warm hand in yours her thin fingers clutching her damp swimsuit dripping try here in less deeper water she said and let go of your hand and she lowered herself into the water and showed you how to put your body so and hands and arms to move and legs to kick and push but all you could hold in mind could bring to bear was her beauty swimming there.
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May 3, 2013
May 3, 2013 at 2:32 AM UTC
SWIMMING IN BEDLAM PARK.
Janice sans red beret walked with you to Bedlam Park where you swam in the open air swimming pool (she swam you tried but failed) there in her green swimsuit her arms pulling her through water her hands pushing away the water’s skin while you stood waist deep gazing at her skills her wet hair her bright eyes you gingerly standing feet on the bottom feeling the water’s pull and push come on she said try to swim be brave and you dived forward into the water and splashed and sunk like some broken boat water in your eyes and ears you rose helped by Janice to the surface choking and spluttering wiping water from your stinging eyes she had her hand in yours holding you steady keeping you balanced she apologised for not helping should have helped she said not just stood and stared and you gazed at her through wet eyes forming an image making sense of the shape of her her eyes on you her damp hair limp against her skin o mermaid of the deep you said where is your tail? and she laughed and took you by the hand into the shallower water her warm hand in yours her thin fingers clutching her damp swimsuit dripping try here in less deeper water she said and let go of your hand and she lowered herself into the water and showed you how to put your body so and hands and arms to move and legs to kick and push but all you could hold in mind could bring to bear was her beauty swimming there.
terry-collett
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May 3, 2013
May 3, 2013 at 2:32 AM UTC
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