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Every waking moment in store Crowded with paper galore Deer slumber while basking in the moonlight But the desk lamp still shines terribly bright Newton's laws and the ancient periodic table When will these tests become a fable? Ink spilled in elaborate formulae The hermit emanated a drained sigh Doomsday has arrived When will these deathly trials subside? Questions fired by gunshot Each need to be defeated right on the dot Anxiety fills the panic meter up to the brim These tests decide the strength of the plant stem Weak progress propels the plant to fall While strong achievement props the small flora to stand tall Arbitration day has finally come to an end The days that proceed are emancipated from the time bend All stress vanishes from sight The belligerent has won the grand fight
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Apr 29, 2013
Apr 29, 2013 at 6:16 PM UTC
The Fearsome Finale
Every waking moment in store Crowded with paper galore Deer slumber while basking in the moonlight But the desk lamp still shines terribly bright Newton's laws and the ancient periodic table When will these tests become a fable? Ink spilled in elaborate formulae The hermit emanated a drained sigh Doomsday has arrived When will these deathly trials subside? Questions fired by gunshot Each need to be defeated right on the dot Anxiety fills the panic meter up to the brim These tests decide the strength of the plant stem Weak progress propels the plant to fall While strong achievement props the small flora to stand tall Arbitration day has finally come to an end The days that proceed are emancipated from the time bend All stress vanishes from sight The belligerent has won the grand fight
This is my first couplet poem. Any constructive criticism about how to implement the poetry form more effectively will help immensely!:) -M&M
michael-mitchell
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Apr 29, 2013
Apr 29, 2013 at 6:16 PM UTC
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