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You couldn't help yourself could you? You had to listen to that snake that was basically telling you sweet nothings. Didn't you at least once questioned why a snake was talking to you in the first place? I am pretty sure that it was the only creature that could talk so why weren't you like OHHHH HELLL NO You ate the fruit cause it's suppose to give you wisdom Yeah it gave you wisdom only because you made a mistake Then you had to share the wealth with Adam it's bad enough you went out and believed a snake, maybe you were high or something, But you had to get poor little Adam in trouble too. Now he made a mistake and got wiser now Because of y'all two we all grow old and die Women have to have pain when giving birth Men have to break their backs picking up weeds and junk This is all true It's according to the bible but what gets me is that Snake talked and you didn't even blink an eye.
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Apr 27, 2013
Apr 27, 2013 at 4:11 PM UTC
So you Ate from that Tree millons of years ago and we still get punished?
You couldn't help yourself could you? You had to listen to that snake that was basically telling you sweet nothings. Didn't you at least once questioned why a snake was talking to you in the first place? I am pretty sure that it was the only creature that could talk so why weren't you like OHHHH HELLL NO You ate the fruit cause it's suppose to give you wisdom Yeah it gave you wisdom only because you made a mistake Then you had to share the wealth with Adam it's bad enough you went out and believed a snake, maybe you were high or something, But you had to get poor little Adam in trouble too. Now he made a mistake and got wiser now Because of y'all two we all grow old and die Women have to have pain when giving birth Men have to break their backs picking up weeds and junk This is all true It's according to the bible but what gets me is that Snake talked and you didn't even blink an eye.
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Apr 27, 2013
Apr 27, 2013 at 4:11 PM UTC
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