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please, draw this week-old filly for me. tug out sweeping charcoal lines onto the paper. with soft willow draw each curving, yielding detail: the fringy mane, lamb’s tale, sloppily knotted joints. she’s an inquisitive rascal. catch that in her eyes as she edges towards me. draw her stiff-legged joyful bound away, draw her curved neck in one soft stroke. she’s locked into the matching curve of her mother’s flank and as curve echoes curve milk comes, peace holds, and she shows me glory. draw it if you can, this naked little filly, my body is not so bare and innocent as hers.
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Apr 23, 2013
Apr 23, 2013 at 7:30 PM UTC
Filly
please, draw this week-old filly for me. tug out sweeping charcoal lines onto the paper. with soft willow draw each curving, yielding detail: the fringy mane, lamb’s tale, sloppily knotted joints. she’s an inquisitive rascal. catch that in her eyes as she edges towards me. draw her stiff-legged joyful bound away, draw her curved neck in one soft stroke. she’s locked into the matching curve of her mother’s flank and as curve echoes curve milk comes, peace holds, and she shows me glory. draw it if you can, this naked little filly, my body is not so bare and innocent as hers.
elizabeth-asay-gibson
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Apr 23, 2013
Apr 23, 2013 at 7:30 PM UTC
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