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Head spinning Vision tilting Mind reeling Stomache heaving I don't recall my feet leaving the ground or hopping onto a twisting rollercoaster. Yet, how else would the world be rotating 360 degrees, back-and-forth, upside-down, all in the same moment?
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Apr 17, 2013
Apr 17, 2013 at 7:43 PM UTC
Vertigo
Head spinning Vision tilting Mind reeling Stomache heaving I don't recall my feet leaving the ground or hopping onto a twisting rollercoaster. Yet, how else would the world be rotating 360 degrees, back-and-forth, upside-down, all in the same moment?
If this was written with pen, I'd have much fun with the last several lines in the visual arrangement of them.
chelocean
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Apr 17, 2013
Apr 17, 2013 at 7:43 PM UTC
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