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Sea tides undulate Salt saturates wide valleys Fish leap helplessly Seagulls laugh at moment’s spare Desert sand surrounds Lonely land mass residing Brim with tourism Festivals ignite the flame Native culture dance Parties prosper all around Sun enlightens all Skin tans from ash to brown dust Reggae music blasts Life turns to relaxation This is paradise
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Apr 15, 2013
Apr 15, 2013 at 11:23 PM UTC
"This is Paradise" -Haiku 1
Sea tides undulate Salt saturates wide valleys Fish leap helplessly Seagulls laugh at moment’s spare Desert sand surrounds Lonely land mass residing Brim with tourism Festivals ignite the flame Native culture dance Parties prosper all around Sun enlightens all Skin tans from ash to brown dust Reggae music blasts Life turns to relaxation This is paradise
At first, Haiku writing was tedious (a.k.a. 5-7-5 syllable rule), but it turned out to be great! Haiku is a little different but still in the same species as free verse.:)
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Apr 15, 2013
Apr 15, 2013 at 11:23 PM UTC
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