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There is a revolution, going on in my brain. A battle between the thoughts and the feelings of misinterpreted events and actions in reality, and state of mind. Formed by the basic movements, and uncategorized pattern of the uneven rhythms of your heart beat. The fluctuating flaming bullets, of these things that are called words, coming from a loaded shotgun, called your brain. Thoughts gather, to revolt against the army, of ample lies that have taken control of the whole battlefield. While the truth is overpowered by the lies marching towards them wearing a suit of armor, but have a very sharp sword to stab them in the back. If this was a real battle, there would be bloodshed and tears and torn apart realizations of a reality, that isn't even there. Perceptions coming from those who don't exist, and from those who don't want to. The hills they march over with the smoking guns and ammunition, are getting higher and rockier and bumpier, and the truth can't get past to the other side to attack the lies But they are already too late, there are are, the truth is blindsided, lies hidden inside bodies and behind friendships until you are deceived by the actions of the moment and all of a sudden BAM A bullet fires out of that shotgun The lies will eventually overpower the truth, leaving it to bleed out on the battlefield called life, which will soon become the final resting place. The revolution, has been lost.
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Apr 15, 2013
Apr 15, 2013 at 12:50 PM UTC
a revolution
There is a revolution, going on in my brain. A battle between the thoughts and the feelings of misinterpreted events and actions in reality, and state of mind. Formed by the basic movements, and uncategorized pattern of the uneven rhythms of your heart beat. The fluctuating flaming bullets, of these things that are called words, coming from a loaded shotgun, called your brain. Thoughts gather, to revolt against the army, of ample lies that have taken control of the whole battlefield. While the truth is overpowered by the lies marching towards them wearing a suit of armor, but have a very sharp sword to stab them in the back. If this was a real battle, there would be bloodshed and tears and torn apart realizations of a reality, that isn't even there. Perceptions coming from those who don't exist, and from those who don't want to. The hills they march over with the smoking guns and ammunition, are getting higher and rockier and bumpier, and the truth can't get past to the other side to attack the lies But they are already too late, there are are, the truth is blindsided, lies hidden inside bodies and behind friendships until you are deceived by the actions of the moment and all of a sudden BAM A bullet fires out of that shotgun The lies will eventually overpower the truth, leaving it to bleed out on the battlefield called life, which will soon become the final resting place. The revolution, has been lost.
Not quite finished yet, I will repost when finished
dani-2
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Apr 15, 2013
Apr 15, 2013 at 12:50 PM UTC
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