“Advance!” I shouted
That **** monkey wouldn’t budge, not even to look me in the eye
“Insolent decrepit brat!Advance!”
Still that monkey did nothing
“Advance, I say! Do you hear me? Advance!”
“No.” said the monkey
“No?” I asked incredulously
“No.”
“And why not?” I demanded
“Because” said the monkey “you did not say please.”
Apr 11, 2013
Apr 11, 2013 at 4:32 PM UTC
“Advance!” I shouted
That **** monkey wouldn’t budge, not even to look me in the eye
“Insolent decrepit brat!Advance!”
Still that monkey did nothing
“Advance, I say! Do you hear me? Advance!”
“No.” said the monkey
“No?” I asked incredulously
“No.”
“And why not?” I demanded
“Because” said the monkey “you did not say please.”
I was given 4 random words (decrepit, monkey, no, advance) and was instructed to write a poem as long or as short as I desired. The above is what I came up with.
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