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my eyes burned when I read your poems when I  saw the most real and amazing parts of you that you keep hidden at all times I often look at the people you surround yourself with and wonder how they can't see the beauty, the beauty that is so obviously there but it's okay. it will be because through everything, all the pain that is there, lying just beneath surface I see it I'm not much for words or life changing advice but I hope that with my presence or a strawberry lemonade slushie, you will know that I see it. Others see it too, just please believe me. When I told you that all you can do is just 'be you' I didn't mean it in the cliche way that it sounds... I meant it from the deepest most genuine parts of my being, because if you were to do that, just 'be you' I can't even begin to explain how amazing that would be. Because you are. And you are worth so much more than you realize.
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Dec 5, 2013
Dec 5, 2013 at 2:31 PM UTC
A shared childhood dream
my eyes burned when I read your poems when I  saw the most real and amazing parts of you that you keep hidden at all times I often look at the people you surround yourself with and wonder how they can't see the beauty, the beauty that is so obviously there but it's okay. it will be because through everything, all the pain that is there, lying just beneath surface I see it I'm not much for words or life changing advice but I hope that with my presence or a strawberry lemonade slushie, you will know that I see it. Others see it too, just please believe me. When I told you that all you can do is just 'be you' I didn't mean it in the cliche way that it sounds... I meant it from the deepest most genuine parts of my being, because if you were to do that, just 'be you' I can't even begin to explain how amazing that would be. Because you are. And you are worth so much more than you realize.
olivia-greene
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Dec 5, 2013
Dec 5, 2013 at 2:31 PM UTC
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