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He told her in a whisper that he Doesn't need her mind, Her mind had all the impenetrable corners, She knew. He knew. The twilight of her Unconscious, confused him. He got lost in the distorted vision She held in her mind, Maybe that's why she thought The colour blue had a syrupy Flavour, and nights tasted like Wine, did you know you could Write poems about x-rays? And pour coffee on ice trays? The gaping abyss of endless Possibilities was unduly terrifying, You have to understand. He chose to walk on the frozen Lake, tiptoeing, alert... as if he Held a grenade; Without having to delve deep And shudder into the bottomless Coldness, Getting messed! She felt her reality was a Manuscript; trial and error being a Constant process. She grew into her story, without Living in one. Secretly longing for the love that Sat in a bracket. She was like a guitar solo, Awakening, Maddening. And he was just in search of Something silent and bitter; Trying to find clarity in the Semblance of things, Because he had nothing better! She cooked some spaghetti for His brains, which he ate and Belched, as he was wired with her Electric curls; They waltzed into the most Commonplace of beliefs, As if there was no end to this world! As the dream broke and they Fell off the margins of the book, She found herself underneath The ice sheath of her frozen mind; He was still on his toes... She could only see the fleeting Glimpses of movement while Passion seeped from her poresW
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Dec 27, 2019
Dec 27, 2019 at 5:39 AM UTC
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He told her in a whisper that he Doesn't need her mind, Her mind had all the impenetrable corners, She knew. He knew. The twilight of her Unconscious, confused him. He got lost in the distorted vision She held in her mind, Maybe that's why she thought The colour blue had a syrupy Flavour, and nights tasted like Wine, did you know you could Write poems about x-rays? And pour coffee on ice trays? The gaping abyss of endless Possibilities was unduly terrifying, You have to understand. He chose to walk on the frozen Lake, tiptoeing, alert... as if he Held a grenade; Without having to delve deep And shudder into the bottomless Coldness, Getting messed! She felt her reality was a Manuscript; trial and error being a Constant process. She grew into her story, without Living in one. Secretly longing for the love that Sat in a bracket. She was like a guitar solo, Awakening, Maddening. And he was just in search of Something silent and bitter; Trying to find clarity in the Semblance of things, Because he had nothing better! She cooked some spaghetti for His brains, which he ate and Belched, as he was wired with her Electric curls; They waltzed into the most Commonplace of beliefs, As if there was no end to this world! As the dream broke and they Fell off the margins of the book, She found herself underneath The ice sheath of her frozen mind; He was still on his toes... She could only see the fleeting Glimpses of movement while Passion seeped from her poresW
This is a poem that came to me after watching Eternal Sunshine of the Spotless Mind for the second time, but it came from a different perspective as how memories get tainted and people lose connection to what had actually happened and they run into a cogmire of disruptive emotions...
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Dec 27, 2019
Dec 27, 2019 at 5:39 AM UTC
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