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6 months, 1 year, What a beautiful flower, I plucked it, Hoping I can take a good care of it. i sun it with my smile and happiness, i watered it with faithfulness and loyalty, i worked hard for the best for two of us, hoping i'll get a healthy living flower. But i was wrong, it was not the flower who grow it was the thorn. it grew bigger day by day, until it hurts me so bad I went so mad I didn't feel it until today when i see it with its new owner Then I realize I just lost the war.
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Dec 15, 2019
Dec 15, 2019 at 5:05 AM UTC
Thorn
6 months, 1 year, What a beautiful flower, I plucked it, Hoping I can take a good care of it. i sun it with my smile and happiness, i watered it with faithfulness and loyalty, i worked hard for the best for two of us, hoping i'll get a healthy living flower. But i was wrong, it was not the flower who grow it was the thorn. it grew bigger day by day, until it hurts me so bad I went so mad I didn't feel it until today when i see it with its new owner Then I realize I just lost the war.
17 June 2019
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Banting, Selangor
Dec 15, 2019
Dec 15, 2019 at 5:05 AM UTC
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