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Started as a DEBate, oh wait Wasn't going so well, I could tell Needed a mirACLE.  This debacle. There was the brandishing of threats, overheated bets, Words and gestures exchanged, faces promised to be,"rearranged" Physical constraint, did taint the purity and value, we became estranged Crime and punishment, was the lament "capital", thought one side, with pride MERCY was preferred, as a key word. By the others, "Sisters and brothers of Law 11",  the assignment was to DEBATE the lives and fate of the criminal few who did the deed, do we accede? It almost got out of control, peace took a hit on the atoll. The teacher knew as animosity grew, there might about to be a major crime which would mean to call out the law, He called it "A draw" and "we'll let Parliament decide!" In the end no one got hurt, save their pride, the teacher himself said "it was a miracle, that the debate, did not descend into a debacle".  But to this day, there are some, not in our class or the court of public opinion, but where it really matters, think that this scatters to the four winds justice. DWE 2013-04-03
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Apr 4, 2013
Apr 4, 2013 at 2:32 AM UTC
The Great Debacle
Started as a DEBate, oh wait Wasn't going so well, I could tell Needed a mirACLE.  This debacle. There was the brandishing of threats, overheated bets, Words and gestures exchanged, faces promised to be,"rearranged" Physical constraint, did taint the purity and value, we became estranged Crime and punishment, was the lament "capital", thought one side, with pride MERCY was preferred, as a key word. By the others, "Sisters and brothers of Law 11",  the assignment was to DEBATE the lives and fate of the criminal few who did the deed, do we accede? It almost got out of control, peace took a hit on the atoll. The teacher knew as animosity grew, there might about to be a major crime which would mean to call out the law, He called it "A draw" and "we'll let Parliament decide!" In the end no one got hurt, save their pride, the teacher himself said "it was a miracle, that the debate, did not descend into a debacle".  But to this day, there are some, not in our class or the court of public opinion, but where it really matters, think that this scatters to the four winds justice. DWE 2013-04-03
Circa 1976-77
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Apr 4, 2013 at 2:32 AM UTC
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