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Boldly going nowhere fast Rolling in the fragrant grass This has-been kid sits on his *** Waiting for bad **** to pass Nothing lately comes his way Out of pocket No means to pay He slow starts to slip away Fading fading like the light Slipping sliding losing might Verging deeper Can not be heard This young man won't be deterred This passing phase Won't phase him out He'll rise up strong Without a doubt Learning lessons the hard way Because this kid is known to party This kid known to hit drink hard But it hit him back Left several scars Winded Wounded Fighting back This dark black out Will be a thing of the past
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Apr 3, 2013
Apr 3, 2013 at 8:40 AM UTC
Moving on out and up (needs work- suppossed to be a fast paced rhythm not quite there))
Boldly going nowhere fast Rolling in the fragrant grass This has-been kid sits on his *** Waiting for bad **** to pass Nothing lately comes his way Out of pocket No means to pay He slow starts to slip away Fading fading like the light Slipping sliding losing might Verging deeper Can not be heard This young man won't be deterred This passing phase Won't phase him out He'll rise up strong Without a doubt Learning lessons the hard way Because this kid is known to party This kid known to hit drink hard But it hit him back Left several scars Winded Wounded Fighting back This dark black out Will be a thing of the past
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jack-sneers
Apr 3, 2013
Apr 3, 2013 at 8:40 AM UTC
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