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i'm shivering as i wait for you the cold is unkind to the strangers like me i look at my watch to remind myself of the time you were late but i can wait the freezing breeze was unforgiving it bore right through me as i wait for you passersby would look at me sometimes they'd greet me or ask me why i'm standing outside here in the cold i just replied with a smile or sometimes i would say " i'm waiting for someone " knowing that you'll come soon right? of course you will i'm shivering but much more erratic still waited for you i looked at my watch again it says 9:00 pm when you said you would come at noon the night grew darker as the other little shops starting to close i'm still standing here outside in the cold it's cold the weather the let down it all feels the same i'm shivering but you never came
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Nov 22, 2019
Nov 22, 2019 at 12:29 AM UTC
frostbite
i'm shivering as i wait for you the cold is unkind to the strangers like me i look at my watch to remind myself of the time you were late but i can wait the freezing breeze was unforgiving it bore right through me as i wait for you passersby would look at me sometimes they'd greet me or ask me why i'm standing outside here in the cold i just replied with a smile or sometimes i would say " i'm waiting for someone " knowing that you'll come soon right? of course you will i'm shivering but much more erratic still waited for you i looked at my watch again it says 9:00 pm when you said you would come at noon the night grew darker as the other little shops starting to close i'm still standing here outside in the cold it's cold the weather the let down it all feels the same i'm shivering but you never came
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Nov 22, 2019
Nov 22, 2019 at 12:29 AM UTC
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