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Is on fire! BURNING brightly with thoughts, ideas, emotions that are being thrown everywhere the conference room... is a mess it's filled with white paper ink flows off the stained pages My Once Written Thoughts Chase ME! I run away................... down the steps of abandon mines of long forgotten trains holding all the dark, sticky, bad... stuff I don't want to touch! I keep running to .... what?! suddenly I'm in the forest.... again! that surrounds a large, ocean, vast and empty on the surface. "I'm not going back in that steel walled cage! I'm not! I'm not! I'm not!" The ink grabbed her trying to consume her. She felt numb and cold. She jumped the ocean dragged her to the cage it was only then she remembered this was her mind weather or not the ink got her or she was locked in the ocean steel, walled, cage she being consumed by her thoughts, emotions there is No Way Out!
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Nov 18, 2019
Nov 18, 2019 at 12:47 AM UTC
my mind;
Is on fire! BURNING brightly with thoughts, ideas, emotions that are being thrown everywhere the conference room... is a mess it's filled with white paper ink flows off the stained pages My Once Written Thoughts Chase ME! I run away................... down the steps of abandon mines of long forgotten trains holding all the dark, sticky, bad... stuff I don't want to touch! I keep running to .... what?! suddenly I'm in the forest.... again! that surrounds a large, ocean, vast and empty on the surface. "I'm not going back in that steel walled cage! I'm not! I'm not! I'm not!" The ink grabbed her trying to consume her. She felt numb and cold. She jumped the ocean dragged her to the cage it was only then she remembered this was her mind weather or not the ink got her or she was locked in the ocean steel, walled, cage she being consumed by her thoughts, emotions there is No Way Out!
This poem is made to feel like two things are fighting for the narrative in this case thoughts and emotions VS the girl Yes every misuse of grammar is intentional to create certain emphasis on different sentences
#anxiety#void#lost#trapped
Leximorrison
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Leximorrison
15/F
Nov 18, 2019
Nov 18, 2019 at 12:47 AM UTC
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