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I punched the volume **** like Tyson and Holyfield, plunged us into silence, our heads swimming in phantom sounds. The sun was a muffled glare, but you squinted at me and broke the silent virginity with a cough. The planet whirled like an exotic dancer, stars screamed how beautiful they are, but were outmatched by our sun just because of how close it is. The stars never go away. Not really. We just stop expecting them to be there. We sat still. And me, with all my hypodermic words unable to scratch the surface. And you, with all your delicate features unable to soften the blow. Because at night, we exchange one star for millions, though none of them can keep us warm, and all we want is to see where we're going.
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Mar 29, 2013
Mar 29, 2013 at 11:42 AM UTC
Bad Metaphors are Like Similies
I punched the volume **** like Tyson and Holyfield, plunged us into silence, our heads swimming in phantom sounds. The sun was a muffled glare, but you squinted at me and broke the silent virginity with a cough. The planet whirled like an exotic dancer, stars screamed how beautiful they are, but were outmatched by our sun just because of how close it is. The stars never go away. Not really. We just stop expecting them to be there. We sat still. And me, with all my hypodermic words unable to scratch the surface. And you, with all your delicate features unable to soften the blow. Because at night, we exchange one star for millions, though none of them can keep us warm, and all we want is to see where we're going.
riq-schwartz
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Mar 29, 2013
Mar 29, 2013 at 11:42 AM UTC
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