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Jane stood in a field of kale waist high gazing toward the Downs you stood beside her your hands just touching fingers feeling warmth cows nearby mooing we’ll have to go up there in the summer holidays she said take a picnic mum’ll pack it for us she likes you you gazed at her sideways on her dark hair tied with ribbon her grey coat buttoned to the neck coming to her knees that’ll be good you said I went with my dad way over one day while he was working amongst the trees and I found small skeletons amongst the fallen leaves don’t what it was of though probably a squirrel Jane said or rabbit did it look like it could have been a rabbit? no idea you said it was small could have been a squirrel I guess I put it in a glass tank along with chalk rocks with sea fossils inside she nodded and smiled she held your hand tighter and she drew you though the kale toward the edge of the field where cows were eating the fenced off kale crop and you walked onto the dusty road between hedgerows and down the lane by your cottage the lane narrow the hedges full of birds and song and you sensed her hand in yours her fingers thin entwined with your fingers and on you walked by the small stream at the side the smell of the farm in the air the cows and hay and she there beside you her hand and your hand her coat sleeve brushing against your arm her eyes full of dark beauty her lips slightly open no words just breath on the air and you feeling that joy of just being alive and being there.
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Mar 29, 2013
Mar 29, 2013 at 8:22 AM UTC
JUST BEING THERE.
Jane stood in a field of kale waist high gazing toward the Downs you stood beside her your hands just touching fingers feeling warmth cows nearby mooing we’ll have to go up there in the summer holidays she said take a picnic mum’ll pack it for us she likes you you gazed at her sideways on her dark hair tied with ribbon her grey coat buttoned to the neck coming to her knees that’ll be good you said I went with my dad way over one day while he was working amongst the trees and I found small skeletons amongst the fallen leaves don’t what it was of though probably a squirrel Jane said or rabbit did it look like it could have been a rabbit? no idea you said it was small could have been a squirrel I guess I put it in a glass tank along with chalk rocks with sea fossils inside she nodded and smiled she held your hand tighter and she drew you though the kale toward the edge of the field where cows were eating the fenced off kale crop and you walked onto the dusty road between hedgerows and down the lane by your cottage the lane narrow the hedges full of birds and song and you sensed her hand in yours her fingers thin entwined with your fingers and on you walked by the small stream at the side the smell of the farm in the air the cows and hay and she there beside you her hand and your hand her coat sleeve brushing against your arm her eyes full of dark beauty her lips slightly open no words just breath on the air and you feeling that joy of just being alive and being there.
terry-collett
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Mar 29, 2013
Mar 29, 2013 at 8:22 AM UTC
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