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he found the goddess like so many do in a desperate fall through foundation, clutching to the bleak rim, praying for context. his last moment of wholeness was spent with an upturned face basking in the backlit rays of her promise         *time passes          in a rushed imitation of          magic tricks and carnival rides* when candlelight flew from velvetine fingers he hid from her shadow humbled and yoked the neon grin of morning found him clutching her breath       tucked inside the hollows           sunken through every step           there was nothing left           of his body but two glass eyes caught forever staring into her waxen smile that never thought to melt that only broke with smoke       *tell your children:       hope is a scar       the fault, mistake       obsession with beauty       will roll you in ash       (a ghost of his telling)        and empty you’ll wake*
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Mar 29, 2013
Mar 29, 2013 at 12:38 AM UTC
Wax Obsession
he found the goddess like so many do in a desperate fall through foundation, clutching to the bleak rim, praying for context. his last moment of wholeness was spent with an upturned face basking in the backlit rays of her promise         *time passes          in a rushed imitation of          magic tricks and carnival rides* when candlelight flew from velvetine fingers he hid from her shadow humbled and yoked the neon grin of morning found him clutching her breath       tucked inside the hollows           sunken through every step           there was nothing left           of his body but two glass eyes caught forever staring into her waxen smile that never thought to melt that only broke with smoke       *tell your children:       hope is a scar       the fault, mistake       obsession with beauty       will roll you in ash       (a ghost of his telling)        and empty you’ll wake*
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glen-brunson
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Mar 29, 2013
Mar 29, 2013 at 12:38 AM UTC
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