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I got these voices in my head constantly running through my mind Telling me I'm perfect Telling me I'm fine Saying that I'm useless Saying I should die Please wont you help me I just want some piece of mind I'm sick of screaming out and getting no reply And the way these thoughts are running maybe ill just give up die. Put a pistol to my Temple and just say a quick goodbye. Hit the bar and have a party and then just race out of time. But before I head out let me try these white lines. 1 line 2 line 3 lines done Suddenly I look and all my problems are gone. Listen close Hear the voices? Me neither are they gone? Are my feet on the ground How did I get so high Is that a glimpse of what it's like To live a perfect life. I can see it shine bright The golden fields if Elysium Bathing me in light finally they're gone No demons in sight No voices screaming loud I can finally stop the fight
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Oct 28, 2019
Oct 28, 2019 at 7:34 PM UTC
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I got these voices in my head constantly running through my mind Telling me I'm perfect Telling me I'm fine Saying that I'm useless Saying I should die Please wont you help me I just want some piece of mind I'm sick of screaming out and getting no reply And the way these thoughts are running maybe ill just give up die. Put a pistol to my Temple and just say a quick goodbye. Hit the bar and have a party and then just race out of time. But before I head out let me try these white lines. 1 line 2 line 3 lines done Suddenly I look and all my problems are gone. Listen close Hear the voices? Me neither are they gone? Are my feet on the ground How did I get so high Is that a glimpse of what it's like To live a perfect life. I can see it shine bright The golden fields if Elysium Bathing me in light finally they're gone No demons in sight No voices screaming loud I can finally stop the fight
So I'm trying to write my own songs and I've always loved rap so this is my attempt at a real so that's where the bare bones of a rhyme scheme come in. But anyway enjoy
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Oct 28, 2019
Oct 28, 2019 at 7:34 PM UTC
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