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Under the countless stars, I ponder and wait for a clue. What was I meant to do? W̶h̶y̶ ̶a̶m̶ ̶I̶ ̶h̶e̶r̶e̶?̶ What was I waiting for? Will it be worth the wait? Was it to decide my fate? I̶ ̶f̶o̶r̶g̶e̶t̶.̶ All I remember was a feeling. Like I had to wait and see. Like I had to wait to be free. W̶h̶a̶t̶ ̶i̶s̶ ̶t̶h̶i̶s̶ ̶s̶a̶d̶n̶e̶s̶s̶?̶ Was it for help? Was it for something more? Seriously, what was it for? W̶h̶y̶ ̶s̶h̶o̶u̶l̶d̶ ̶I̶ ̶s̶t̶a̶y̶?̶ I guess I'll wait till' the sun goes down. W̶h̶y̶ ̶t̶h̶e̶ ̶h̶e̶l̶l̶ ̶s̶h̶o̶u̶l̶d̶ ̶I̶ ̶s̶t̶i̶c̶k̶ ̶a̶r̶o̶u̶n̶d̶?̶
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Oct 26, 2019
Oct 26, 2019 at 9:46 PM UTC
W̶h̶y̶?̶
Under the countless stars, I ponder and wait for a clue. What was I meant to do? W̶h̶y̶ ̶a̶m̶ ̶I̶ ̶h̶e̶r̶e̶?̶ What was I waiting for? Will it be worth the wait? Was it to decide my fate? I̶ ̶f̶o̶r̶g̶e̶t̶.̶ All I remember was a feeling. Like I had to wait and see. Like I had to wait to be free. W̶h̶a̶t̶ ̶i̶s̶ ̶t̶h̶i̶s̶ ̶s̶a̶d̶n̶e̶s̶s̶?̶ Was it for help? Was it for something more? Seriously, what was it for? W̶h̶y̶ ̶s̶h̶o̶u̶l̶d̶ ̶I̶ ̶s̶t̶a̶y̶?̶ I guess I'll wait till' the sun goes down. W̶h̶y̶ ̶t̶h̶e̶ ̶h̶e̶l̶l̶ ̶s̶h̶o̶u̶l̶d̶ ̶I̶ ̶s̶t̶i̶c̶k̶ ̶a̶r̶o̶u̶n̶d̶?̶
Two poems in one day! Like the strike through's I added? Adds a bit more... story and meaning.
Melwritesstuff
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Non-binary/Canada
Oct 26, 2019
Oct 26, 2019 at 9:46 PM UTC
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