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do you know how wonderful your eyes are? those beautiful eyes that are more mysterious than the corners of the universe, that have more depth than the deepest trenches of the ocean that are closest to the core of the earth. those frost-bitten irises that make my thoughts stop cold in their tracks, the blue that's so icy it freezes my heart in place. that bone-chilling gaze that throws an avalanche of memories and emotions at me until I'm buried and suffering from hypothermia. ~kns
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Mar 26, 2013
Mar 26, 2013 at 2:09 PM UTC
Chilling.
do you know how wonderful your eyes are? those beautiful eyes that are more mysterious than the corners of the universe, that have more depth than the deepest trenches of the ocean that are closest to the core of the earth. those frost-bitten irises that make my thoughts stop cold in their tracks, the blue that's so icy it freezes my heart in place. that bone-chilling gaze that throws an avalanche of memories and emotions at me until I'm buried and suffering from hypothermia. ~kns
A little cliche, perhaps, but I don't think it turned out that badly.
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Mar 26, 2013
Mar 26, 2013 at 2:09 PM UTC
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