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* I am done crying and death is my state. To the fate of hollow cacti I can relate. Surprising is this, Since I thought the grim reeper Would ooze out with the dew of my purging Like mucus during a cold. My spirit is a barren desert with nowhere to go. There, The Saguaro Cactus have No choice But to be rooted in the Dusty dross of the land in the desert. Laiden with thorns. If they shed their tears, they die.*
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Mar 23, 2013
Mar 23, 2013 at 1:47 AM UTC
In A Dessert Laiden with Thorns
* I am done crying and death is my state. To the fate of hollow cacti I can relate. Surprising is this, Since I thought the grim reeper Would ooze out with the dew of my purging Like mucus during a cold. My spirit is a barren desert with nowhere to go. There, The Saguaro Cactus have No choice But to be rooted in the Dusty dross of the land in the desert. Laiden with thorns. If they shed their tears, they die.*
I know this is a shitload of self loathing and pitty, but I feel it's appropriate since poetry is a way to vent your feelings. Post Script, just in case you're curious, I'm doing alright now. L-: all is well.
jv-tranquilnight
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Mar 23, 2013
Mar 23, 2013 at 1:47 AM UTC
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