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I was aware that we were seventeen and how on earth could it all be so hazily perfect, but also how couldn’t it? I wanted to raise chickens with you. I wanted to drive a poemmobile cross-country just because. In these early moments: *We’re Shakespeare’s lovers standing up on Bambi’s legs, and always will be.* I knew we'd met too early, sometimes. If we were twenty-something and living in Bohemia when we collided at a jazz-bar drinking dusky whiskey. Then life would follow. I was scared that because we both needed something to latch onto so badly, there was delusion and we were too caught up in ourselves to see it; that my first love would flit away like everyone else’s. We were sitting cross-legged on the precipice of youth, you whispering in my ear that you hate haikus, when I decided that my first love was realer than any image of white washed sheets and yellow sunlit apartments that this fresh faced heart could concoct.   Eight months later when you broke it I realized I was right about everything because the thing about Shakespeare’s lovers is that they die young and Bambi’s legs collapse with knobby knees but the things they held up while they could were so ******* beautiful that nobody really cared. And we were so ******* beautiful, how could I possibly have expected that to last.
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Mar 20, 2013
Mar 20, 2013 at 10:20 PM UTC
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I was aware that we were seventeen and how on earth could it all be so hazily perfect, but also how couldn’t it? I wanted to raise chickens with you. I wanted to drive a poemmobile cross-country just because. In these early moments: *We’re Shakespeare’s lovers standing up on Bambi’s legs, and always will be.* I knew we'd met too early, sometimes. If we were twenty-something and living in Bohemia when we collided at a jazz-bar drinking dusky whiskey. Then life would follow. I was scared that because we both needed something to latch onto so badly, there was delusion and we were too caught up in ourselves to see it; that my first love would flit away like everyone else’s. We were sitting cross-legged on the precipice of youth, you whispering in my ear that you hate haikus, when I decided that my first love was realer than any image of white washed sheets and yellow sunlit apartments that this fresh faced heart could concoct.   Eight months later when you broke it I realized I was right about everything because the thing about Shakespeare’s lovers is that they die young and Bambi’s legs collapse with knobby knees but the things they held up while they could were so ******* beautiful that nobody really cared. And we were so ******* beautiful, how could I possibly have expected that to last.
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Mar 20, 2013
Mar 20, 2013 at 10:20 PM UTC
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