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Isolation slowly starves away a man's mind gnawing away at what he holds dear the flooding room fills as he gasps for breath praying for a pocket deeper down he sinks to the darker depths In his chest sharp blades writh like snakes his heart beat thuds like a heavy hammer relentlessly ringing in his ears pulsating pressure like a serpents coil crushes cracks and breaks his brittle body only the pain prevents him from drifting a hazy blur blackens his vision as silently his screams bubble away In one more breath his futile fight finishes. When suddenly a deathly peace penetrates like the shock after a plunge into an icy pool as a feint flicker of light shines he drifts towards his final hope
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Sep 13, 2019
Sep 13, 2019 at 4:50 PM UTC
Slowly sinking
Isolation slowly starves away a man's mind gnawing away at what he holds dear the flooding room fills as he gasps for breath praying for a pocket deeper down he sinks to the darker depths In his chest sharp blades writh like snakes his heart beat thuds like a heavy hammer relentlessly ringing in his ears pulsating pressure like a serpents coil crushes cracks and breaks his brittle body only the pain prevents him from drifting a hazy blur blackens his vision as silently his screams bubble away In one more breath his futile fight finishes. When suddenly a deathly peace penetrates like the shock after a plunge into an icy pool as a feint flicker of light shines he drifts towards his final hope
I tried to write this with a dual ending, the light he sees is either the surface as he re-emerges or the light before death.
WilliamDeKlerk
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19/M/South Africa
Sep 13, 2019
Sep 13, 2019 at 4:50 PM UTC
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