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Do you have a "Mindful Eye"? For challenges you face on your way.. Or do you take a critical stance.. For each flaw, each "trouble" of the day? From where do our judgements echo? Intruding into Present from Past.. How well do you recognize the script? You follow blindly believing you're cast.. In a role which allows no liberty.. To move free or breathe new life.. If you knew your role to be optional.. Would you find courage to let go of strife? Would you see your perception subjective? Suffering not manditory from Pain.. Would you re-map your inner workings.. To move forward your "healing brain"? Now for me, I can tell you.. I suffer from "exhaulted opinions" too.. I stand in harsh judgement.. Of all "I can't" but wish I could do.. And as I become more flustered.. More discouraged and "proven" correct.. My Mindful Eye waits with patience.. That someday soon we'll connect.
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Mar 19, 2013
Mar 19, 2013 at 4:18 PM UTC
A Mindful Eye
Do you have a "Mindful Eye"? For challenges you face on your way.. Or do you take a critical stance.. For each flaw, each "trouble" of the day? From where do our judgements echo? Intruding into Present from Past.. How well do you recognize the script? You follow blindly believing you're cast.. In a role which allows no liberty.. To move free or breathe new life.. If you knew your role to be optional.. Would you find courage to let go of strife? Would you see your perception subjective? Suffering not manditory from Pain.. Would you re-map your inner workings.. To move forward your "healing brain"? Now for me, I can tell you.. I suffer from "exhaulted opinions" too.. I stand in harsh judgement.. Of all "I can't" but wish I could do.. And as I become more flustered.. More discouraged and "proven" correct.. My Mindful Eye waits with patience.. That someday soon we'll connect.
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Mar 19, 2013
Mar 19, 2013 at 4:18 PM UTC
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