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Had your thoughts been more pure like your skin, As bright as the diamonds on your soft wrist, Had you been more away from fault and sin, Or giving each action a cunning twist, And had you been more noble than fine art, More modest like a meditating monk, From desirous fame and names apart, And not on an uncontrollable lust drunk, Your style would have been much more prettier, And pleasing to look at – without a doubt – Both the inside and the exterior, People would not see you as a washout. But you'll not change until you see that rules Shape prettiness right, like forms do to jewels.
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Sep 3, 2019
Sep 3, 2019 at 12:31 PM UTC
If Only
Had your thoughts been more pure like your skin, As bright as the diamonds on your soft wrist, Had you been more away from fault and sin, Or giving each action a cunning twist, And had you been more noble than fine art, More modest like a meditating monk, From desirous fame and names apart, And not on an uncontrollable lust drunk, Your style would have been much more prettier, And pleasing to look at – without a doubt – Both the inside and the exterior, People would not see you as a washout. But you'll not change until you see that rules Shape prettiness right, like forms do to jewels.
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Sep 3, 2019
Sep 3, 2019 at 12:31 PM UTC
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