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What is it that makesmefeel alive                                                       Could it be the way you touch my face                                                                                       sometimes                                                                                    in sweet hesitation                                                                 or                                                                                    embarrassed confusion                                                                 or                                                                                  I actually don't know most of the time The ground invites me everywhere, makesmefeel endless. But only if my heels sink into the soggy paths                                                              Unlimited in any direction                                                   →   ↑    ↓    ←               the only requirement is to ask [where].... Icanfeel myself merging into the planes above, drawn to the only man in the sky strong enough for the extra weight I haven't prepared at all, for what might happen if it rained and my grip slipped (along with GODs tears) returning to the place I thought I flew away from                                            "flew" right on ↑ with the smoke from your ears, the last exhale of Tink's fairy dust no one imagined lighting it on fire and sending only their minds, NeverNever to Land again >>>>> Hair mademefeel like a doll           MADE OF ROCKS AND BLOCKS AND HARD PLACES        .........remember? dolls are breakable and I don't like glass so I found tough stuff       // But hair // I could swing it all day and create sound waves → Always wondered if anyone heard the same tune. I cut it, the pitch was too flat and now its High and Mighty                                                 I promised the part that [makesmefeel] that     s   l   o   w     is the way to go                                                                                                                             so I drove on the right side                                                                                                looked both ways and would you believe it!                             I crashed                             but just my car and the ♥'s of my life said things can be replaced and $$$ isn't everything so I smiled and sprinkled more dust and let the hurt of guilt strip down to its naked truth I'll keep trying to make sure my heart doesn't stop and we can all carry on for see, while sometimes what  [makesmefeel] can get confused, it's happy                                                                    ---loaded with images and dinners for two and promises                                                                      my friends make to each other and a glamorous glowing most of all its nervous about the long run I've never ventured without shoes and it's all so rocky-not like the yachts on a bad day but the way rapids plan their jogging trials and all the sights all the sounds all the finger ****** and cotton the cheats and final laps ribbons and red pens all the gentle brushstrokes and chafing                                                                                that's what   makesmefeel    alive
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Mar 17, 2013
Mar 17, 2013 at 7:27 PM UTC
makesmefeel (train of thought)
What is it that makesmefeel alive                                                       Could it be the way you touch my face                                                                                       sometimes                                                                                    in sweet hesitation                                                                 or                                                                                    embarrassed confusion                                                                 or                                                                                  I actually don't know most of the time The ground invites me everywhere, makesmefeel endless. But only if my heels sink into the soggy paths                                                              Unlimited in any direction                                                   →   ↑    ↓    ←               the only requirement is to ask [where].... Icanfeel myself merging into the planes above, drawn to the only man in the sky strong enough for the extra weight I haven't prepared at all, for what might happen if it rained and my grip slipped (along with GODs tears) returning to the place I thought I flew away from                                            "flew" right on ↑ with the smoke from your ears, the last exhale of Tink's fairy dust no one imagined lighting it on fire and sending only their minds, NeverNever to Land again >>>>> Hair mademefeel like a doll           MADE OF ROCKS AND BLOCKS AND HARD PLACES        .........remember? dolls are breakable and I don't like glass so I found tough stuff       // But hair // I could swing it all day and create sound waves → Always wondered if anyone heard the same tune. I cut it, the pitch was too flat and now its High and Mighty                                                 I promised the part that [makesmefeel] that     s   l   o   w     is the way to go                                                                                                                             so I drove on the right side                                                                                                looked both ways and would you believe it!                             I crashed                             but just my car and the ♥'s of my life said things can be replaced and $$$ isn't everything so I smiled and sprinkled more dust and let the hurt of guilt strip down to its naked truth I'll keep trying to make sure my heart doesn't stop and we can all carry on for see, while sometimes what  [makesmefeel] can get confused, it's happy                                                                    ---loaded with images and dinners for two and promises                                                                      my friends make to each other and a glamorous glowing most of all its nervous about the long run I've never ventured without shoes and it's all so rocky-not like the yachts on a bad day but the way rapids plan their jogging trials and all the sights all the sounds all the finger ****** and cotton the cheats and final laps ribbons and red pens all the gentle brushstrokes and chafing                                                                                that's what   makesmefeel    alive
megan-hundley
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25/F/American
Mar 17, 2013
Mar 17, 2013 at 7:27 PM UTC
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