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The rain came down. I sat on the doorstep, eating tinned peaches, and the rain fell. Walking out, into the city, life falls in one-two beats; being nothing and comfortable, the architecture stows straight lips, moves on, the rain falls. Freight rolls, wet tracks northbound, over-bridges exuding fine china, two fishermen idle away remaining hours; concrete bunches the rain into shallows. How hollow the sea, that home, the crooked lines of the inland peninsula; how strange, this routine, in how so very full of emptiness I have become, like the rain, having fallen upon ebbing tides. The rain no longer falls.
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Mar 17, 2013
Mar 17, 2013 at 12:16 AM UTC
petrichor/soak
The rain came down. I sat on the doorstep, eating tinned peaches, and the rain fell. Walking out, into the city, life falls in one-two beats; being nothing and comfortable, the architecture stows straight lips, moves on, the rain falls. Freight rolls, wet tracks northbound, over-bridges exuding fine china, two fishermen idle away remaining hours; concrete bunches the rain into shallows. How hollow the sea, that home, the crooked lines of the inland peninsula; how strange, this routine, in how so very full of emptiness I have become, like the rain, having fallen upon ebbing tides. The rain no longer falls.
tom-mccone
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New Zealander
Mar 17, 2013
Mar 17, 2013 at 12:16 AM UTC
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