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I thought that daydreaming Was  allowed always, That  no age  could Stop you  from  doing  so, Far  away,  to lands With a precious gaze, Who no one  other  than  yourself Would know. There would be  many Pastel  meadows there, And  storylines Of  characters unknown, Some  ugly,  tragical  or  only  fair, Who still  all  have  to be To people  shown. But  no, it's hard  to think it is allowed; I  should be  serious, Only  think of the  things Who're  near, And  not  be  like  a  cloud, Always  on well-known  earth  – Not  up above. Now  I  am  in my Twenties and reflect, If  I  should embrace  this, Or  only  neglect.
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Aug 25, 2019
Aug 25, 2019 at 4:03 PM UTC
Daydream Limit
I thought that daydreaming Was  allowed always, That  no age  could Stop you  from  doing  so, Far  away,  to lands With a precious gaze, Who no one  other  than  yourself Would know. There would be  many Pastel  meadows there, And  storylines Of  characters unknown, Some  ugly,  tragical  or  only  fair, Who still  all  have  to be To people  shown. But  no, it's hard  to think it is allowed; I  should be  serious, Only  think of the  things Who're  near, And  not  be  like  a  cloud, Always  on well-known  earth  – Not  up above. Now  I  am  in my Twenties and reflect, If  I  should embrace  this, Or  only  neglect.
This poem is actually a rhyming, iambic and Shakespearean sonnet but I made it look like free verse :p
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Aug 25, 2019
Aug 25, 2019 at 4:03 PM UTC
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