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I bought a new car today It is red with A sunroof And trendy black wheels I'll cruise by with music blaring And smile And wave my hand Through the open roof There will remain a hole In my heart and soul That is black with Tiny scars where life and you scratched me And there is no bandage so it heals
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Mar 16, 2013
Mar 16, 2013 at 6:48 PM UTC
New Car
I bought a new car today It is red with A sunroof And trendy black wheels I'll cruise by with music blaring And smile And wave my hand Through the open roof There will remain a hole In my heart and soul That is black with Tiny scars where life and you scratched me And there is no bandage so it heals
I did get a car, but the rest is thematic! I wanted to comment on materialism. Materials can't plug holes, but I have no holes now. Thanks for reading!
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Mar 16, 2013
Mar 16, 2013 at 6:48 PM UTC
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