That phrase makes me shiver
Makes some solemn silent (?) resounding
Sends me flailing: **** **** **** (word choice is dodgy)
Supersedes sentience
Overall, I’m somewhat confused and disappointed by your work. Please reconsider your ********** of the English language.
Jul 29, 2019
Jul 29, 2019 at 3:00 PM UTC
That phrase makes me shiver
Makes some solemn silent (?) resounding
Sends me flailing: **** **** **** (word choice is dodgy)
Supersedes sentience
Overall, I’m somewhat confused and disappointed by your work. Please reconsider your ********** of the English language.
The critic becomes a part of the work. Twice.