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Visiting once more brought the smells all back, Stout, mixed with cigar smoke, maybe. I guess it still lingers; Damp had crept  into the only wall left Burrowing its way in, nesting in the crevices. It must have been 6, maybe 7 years to the day When I got a beer from Seamus at the bar And watched Jack, Billy and Sean down Guinness With all the finesse of  blind dogs. What dogs they were though, the furious three; Piercingly loud they screeched At every dart that narrowly escaped the clutches of the bulls eye And nestled itself in the matted padding of the run-down walls. Even on its last legs, Carlton Vale still kicked with its escaping life; Now it is clear that desire to fight Went away the moment the bulldozer touched that first wall, and All that is left is Billy’s lucky dart Defending its resting place in the centre of my memories.
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Jul 26, 2019
Jul 26, 2019 at 5:33 PM UTC
Billy's Dart
Visiting once more brought the smells all back, Stout, mixed with cigar smoke, maybe. I guess it still lingers; Damp had crept  into the only wall left Burrowing its way in, nesting in the crevices. It must have been 6, maybe 7 years to the day When I got a beer from Seamus at the bar And watched Jack, Billy and Sean down Guinness With all the finesse of  blind dogs. What dogs they were though, the furious three; Piercingly loud they screeched At every dart that narrowly escaped the clutches of the bulls eye And nestled itself in the matted padding of the run-down walls. Even on its last legs, Carlton Vale still kicked with its escaping life; Now it is clear that desire to fight Went away the moment the bulldozer touched that first wall, and All that is left is Billy’s lucky dart Defending its resting place in the centre of my memories.
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Jul 26, 2019
Jul 26, 2019 at 5:33 PM UTC
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