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India women dip white linen cloths into vats of the most beautiful colors, Yogis meditate. Dodoitsu 7,7,7,5  Japanese style of poetry. Circa 1600s. Often concerning love or work, and usually comical.  In my case I was trying to show an analogy between dipping into meditation and the dipping of cloth in a vat of dye. But I also found it humorous that the men meditated, while the women worked.
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Mar 9, 2013
Mar 9, 2013 at 11:58 PM UTC
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India women dip white linen cloths into vats of the most beautiful colors, Yogis meditate. Dodoitsu 7,7,7,5  Japanese style of poetry. Circa 1600s. Often concerning love or work, and usually comical.  In my case I was trying to show an analogy between dipping into meditation and the dipping of cloth in a vat of dye. But I also found it humorous that the men meditated, while the women worked.
Harrogate, TN March 2013
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Mar 9, 2013
Mar 9, 2013 at 11:58 PM UTC
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