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Saturday mornings growing up my mother made me clean the bathroom . windex . bleach . scrub brush . rags . mop . bucket . broom . dustpan . lots of paper towels she insisted I clean the bathroom every Saturday morning before I did anything else with absolutely no chance of an allowance she paid me plenty she said . shelter . food . clothing . television . internet . video games . books . some sort of education not to mention . life “do it because you love me” so waking up Saturday meant cleaning the bathroom it meant my hands reeked of chemicals while my friends enjoyed games I couldn't join it meant I missed the best of all the cartoons everyone else watched it meant I didn’t feel like loving my mother for years I begrudgingly . scrubbed . wiped . cleaned that bathroom until it sparkled - until it shined like the top of the Chrysler building . sink . mirror . toilet . tub . floor all of it spotless love you mom then in college there's this woman that I'm living with this woman that provides me with . shelter . food . clothing . television . internet . etc. and she makes me feel alive so I clean her bathroom and when she asks me, “why?” all I can think to say is “I did it because I love you” and it feels like that's the truth
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Jul 19, 2019
Jul 19, 2019 at 2:57 PM UTC
Cleaning as a Love Language
Saturday mornings growing up my mother made me clean the bathroom . windex . bleach . scrub brush . rags . mop . bucket . broom . dustpan . lots of paper towels she insisted I clean the bathroom every Saturday morning before I did anything else with absolutely no chance of an allowance she paid me plenty she said . shelter . food . clothing . television . internet . video games . books . some sort of education not to mention . life “do it because you love me” so waking up Saturday meant cleaning the bathroom it meant my hands reeked of chemicals while my friends enjoyed games I couldn't join it meant I missed the best of all the cartoons everyone else watched it meant I didn’t feel like loving my mother for years I begrudgingly . scrubbed . wiped . cleaned that bathroom until it sparkled - until it shined like the top of the Chrysler building . sink . mirror . toilet . tub . floor all of it spotless love you mom then in college there's this woman that I'm living with this woman that provides me with . shelter . food . clothing . television . internet . etc. and she makes me feel alive so I clean her bathroom and when she asks me, “why?” all I can think to say is “I did it because I love you” and it feels like that's the truth
sowhataustin
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33/M/American
Jul 19, 2019
Jul 19, 2019 at 2:57 PM UTC
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