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"Will you love me for fifty years?" The young girl asked beside the tombstone. "Of course! I've loved you a whole week already, haven't I?" And suddenly his hand was placed on-top of mine, and I looked towards him like glitter. Under the arches, the school children watched the couplet conjoin as they face each other in bliss. The newlyweds and likely lads throw their flowers as they walk on the mud; puppy love if you ask me. "Do you kiss boys, Muriel?" "Sometimes, if he's charming." "Well, aren't you frightened?" "Oh, why should I be frightened? It's quite nice when you get used to it I would say!."
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Jul 16, 2019
Jul 16, 2019 at 8:18 PM UTC
Around The Rose Garden, Daniel.
"Will you love me for fifty years?" The young girl asked beside the tombstone. "Of course! I've loved you a whole week already, haven't I?" And suddenly his hand was placed on-top of mine, and I looked towards him like glitter. Under the arches, the school children watched the couplet conjoin as they face each other in bliss. The newlyweds and likely lads throw their flowers as they walk on the mud; puppy love if you ask me. "Do you kiss boys, Muriel?" "Sometimes, if he's charming." "Well, aren't you frightened?" "Oh, why should I be frightened? It's quite nice when you get used to it I would say!."
Based on the classic 1971 film, Melody.
alfredwhitnell
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19/M/Essex, England.
Jul 16, 2019
Jul 16, 2019 at 8:18 PM UTC
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