i cant stop sneezing 
it took me fifteen minutes to write that
its my birthday but i dont deserve it
i realize myself in sharp bursts 
slices between when its all mechanical
closing one eye to type and record it
look at my filthy fingers
scrub cuticles and continue
what abhorrent keys
clean those
(sneeze)
behind me rhythmic tickling 
(sneeze)
pirouette
(sneeze)

allan-jain-bonder

self depricaction (sneeze)

Jun 6, 2026

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la-cazadora

i think these lines are the strongest:
"i realize myself in sharp bursts
slices between when its all mechanical
closing one eye to type and record it"
it foreshadows the latter half of the poem -- its assortment of abrupt, snippety words and phrases. 
I think you really captured the moment here, however idle or mundane it may have seemed at the time. And hey, as Emerson says, "We do not know today whether we are busy or idle. In times when we thought ourselves indolent, we have afterwards discovered that much was accomplished and much was begun in us.  All our days are so unprofitable while they pass, that 'tis wonderful where or when we ever got anything of this which we call wisdom, poetry, virtue." - from his essay, "Experience"