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In that night there was a deeper night, in sorrow a deeper sorrow, in your sorrowful eyes more more sorrowful eyes I descried, the deep night of your eyes as I lay beside you, your head, then your head lying on night's pillow, deeper than a hollow hole filled with tender tears, as you told me of the night, the deeper night of your life, your hair wet with deeper tears on night's side of your visage, when you had to leave your son to save yourself and him, a hurt that still hurts, a deeper night hurt you shared with me through deep night sobs, deeper sobs, wetting your cheeks and neck and night hair, the hurts, the deeper night hurts that robbed you of yourself and him, of how you had to go in order to return, the sinuous path, convoluted and constrained, to leave the night, to come back in the day. You knew day followed night, but your hollow heart howled at the rending end that began a deeper night. All I could do was hold you in the deep, the deeper night, and let you sob and shake, only to awake to that brighter day. TOD HOWARD HAWKS
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Jun 14, 2019
Jun 14, 2019 at 10:55 AM UTC
A DEEPER NIGHT
In that night there was a deeper night, in sorrow a deeper sorrow, in your sorrowful eyes more more sorrowful eyes I descried, the deep night of your eyes as I lay beside you, your head, then your head lying on night's pillow, deeper than a hollow hole filled with tender tears, as you told me of the night, the deeper night of your life, your hair wet with deeper tears on night's side of your visage, when you had to leave your son to save yourself and him, a hurt that still hurts, a deeper night hurt you shared with me through deep night sobs, deeper sobs, wetting your cheeks and neck and night hair, the hurts, the deeper night hurts that robbed you of yourself and him, of how you had to go in order to return, the sinuous path, convoluted and constrained, to leave the night, to come back in the day. You knew day followed night, but your hollow heart howled at the rending end that began a deeper night. All I could do was hold you in the deep, the deeper night, and let you sob and shake, only to awake to that brighter day. TOD HOWARD HAWKS
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Jun 14, 2019
Jun 14, 2019 at 10:55 AM UTC
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